Millions and millions are grains of sand,
Millions spread over a desert land.
Now and then they take a flight,
Each time resting on a different site.
Sometimes they are so unsettlingly still,
Like an unthinking, unmoving, sandy hill.
And sometimes an unstoppable sandstorm,
A bedlam, a flurry, as swishes take form.
And these grains of sand are my thoughts,
Each motion followed by upshots.
And my mind a timeless desert,
With grains of thoughts both genial and curt.
My soul a traveler in this desert of bliss,
A complete desert with just one thing amiss.
Amiss is an oasis to quench my curiosity,
But it’s very absence is the survival of this desert city.
- Pakhi
wow, profound and magnificent!
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Thankyou so much for your encouraging words!! Thanks for visiting!
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Pakhi…I am amazed at your level of expression. ..I have gone through your other writings too. Really appreciate your attention to detail (Glasses for example):-). Titli, my daughter, loved it too! Very beautiful thoughts…wonderful expression! Keep it up…you are already becoming an idol for many kids:-)
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Thankyou so much for taking the time out and going through my writings! I am overwhelmed!
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Went through your poems,great thoughts put on paper.keep it up
Pravat uncle
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Thank you so much uncle!!
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Really so creative…so thoughtful…..u take us to the world of imagination….way to go my little princess Pakhi. …your Saurabh uncle is proud of you dear!! May God bless you with all the wisdom and happiness of life
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Thank you uncle! I am humbled!
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I like this poem. I was visualizing grains of sand.
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Glad to know that!! Thank you for visiting!
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Wonderful words. All the best and continue creating new marvels. God bless you Pakhi.
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Thankyou so much!
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Very nice thoughts…fantablous..!!!!
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Thankyou so much! Thanks for visiting!
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